Sunday, August 7, 2011

Please, what are your opinions on the following plot, names, everything?

The names are fine--names are the least of your worries. I don't really care for "girl likes bad boy because he's bad" stories, and you don't actually have much of a plot here but a mere premise--you need conflict, rising action, character development, and much more in a story.

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